Zayoon

Hello dear , how're you and how's everything .?
at the begin I want to apologize for being away and inactive , my work and preparations for my engagement is taking most of my time even i travel last week without saying goodbye

I've a lot of new work and less time to submit but I'll promise you to try my best , and also you can follow me on instagram so you'll see more photos then here hehe xD

My main subject for this journal is the feature the beautiful winners of Ladybug Contest held by OliviaMichalski and Kara-a

The first Winner was puckrietveld
"you must watch her , she's amazing "


Everything in her shot is perfect , well done

The Second Winner is meganjoy


and ... i can't say anything for such artist
big hug honey

The Third Winner is blameMYGreenSoul


Nice capture ,, and congratulations all

Before the goodbye , I'll be so happy to check out my gallery and Thank you my old and new watcher
you mean a lot to me

I'm gonna be a Mrs. by the end of the week , wish me happiness and good luck :*
Bye

Days ago , i submit this photos to a group , they decline it and when i ask why please .!
I get a very rude replay ..

" It lacks both creativity and subject.
It was took from such a horrible angle, you could've got a much nicer and better shot from another one.
Colors are dull and should've been a bit more enhanced.
It is not a shame to retouch your images if you do not own a fully professional camera.
Use light-room and get more familiar with Photoshop "

I  surprised first , then i feel depressed and a little bit sad , is't really that much bad .?
I forget that and think about people who don't know how to give a short "or long" , good critique . It's about not just telling the artist what's bad and good in their artwork , it's about savoir faire ,  Choosing the right words and tone , and much more ..
I write  a paragraph before about some tips for  professional critique and I would like to share it with you , I'm sure most of you know that already but take it as a reminder and maybe some points are out of your mind  ..

1- Look at the whole photo and pay attention to the smallest details like light and shadow .
2- Start with a positive  phrase , even the " simplest photos " the artist make an effort to take it .
3- Arrange your points with a mistake and it's possible solutions .
4- Start with the basic mistakes , then the smallest ones , then criticize the post-processing if there .
5- Don't mention or repeat points which stated before .
6- Ask the artist about the camera sitting , the place and type of light used if you see that'll be helpful .
7- Ask if the artwork is new for him or old one so he's already know his mistakes .
8- Ask if the artwork is professional or just for documentation .
9- Don't say that you criticize too much , because every artist is looking for good critiques to improve .
10- Use well know terms , and be away from complexity .
11- End your critique again with compliment sentence and wish them good luck .

I hope that was helpful , and excuse me for any grammar mistakes " the original is written in Arabic ^^"

Thank you for reading ..  Have a nice day

Zaina